tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post5606433898620902647..comments2023-10-25T05:30:54.507-04:00Comments on Oh Get A Grip!: Stanley's ResolveAshe Barkerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03390519279886657608noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-55930094131213074412016-04-09T14:28:58.942-04:002016-04-09T14:28:58.942-04:00Nice correlation between high school jocks and pim...Nice correlation between high school jocks and pimples, both of which need to be removed so the hero can get what he wants. The narrator's thinking is understandable, even though we can guess that Maryanne wouldn't willingly fall into the arms of the guy who murdered half the football team. Definitely dark.Jean Robertahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08805088081675965859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-75673423017963955902016-04-07T15:38:29.325-04:002016-04-07T15:38:29.325-04:00I hope Stanley never gets rid of the pimples! Mena...I hope Stanley never gets rid of the pimples! Menacing and effective, for sure. Annabeth Leonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07455191827664110878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-62621765415093187722016-04-06T20:06:20.099-04:002016-04-06T20:06:20.099-04:00Thanks, Sacchi and Lisabet-
Heheh... girls in hor...Thanks, Sacchi and Lisabet-<br /><br />Heheh... girls in horror movies are always doing the wrong things, aren't they? <br /><br />DONT GO INTO THE CELLAR FOR CHRISSAKES.<br /><br />Maryanne is alive. Stanley's convinced he's the man for her. (and he's gonna prove it).<br /><br />Lisabet- Cool. An internal call and response effect is exactly what I intended for this. In fact, I described it that way to one of the crits I got on ERWA. Unfortunately, I didn't fix the error on the 'let's', which everybody critting let me know about. Damn!Daddy Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12927663248424944119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-44297462393910871842016-04-06T18:42:40.162-04:002016-04-06T18:42:40.162-04:00Bravo! Great rhythm here, too, almost like call an...Bravo! Great rhythm here, too, almost like call and response.Lisabet Saraihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05162514190572269660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-12974353387717150132016-04-06T16:55:25.915-04:002016-04-06T16:55:25.915-04:00Hmm, I wonder whether Maryanne has noticed that at...Hmm, I wonder whether Maryanne has noticed that at least two guys she's fucked have disappeared. Might think twice (or more) about going parking out in that supposedly isolated spot. Or maybe she thinks like the girls in horror movies.<br /><br />Or maybe she's dead already, too--I couldn't quite figure that out.<br /><br />Beautifully dark and creepy story. Sacchi Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10801164916418570059noreply@blogger.com