tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post5829815482650067130..comments2023-10-25T05:30:54.507-04:00Comments on Oh Get A Grip!: StairmasterAshe Barkerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03390519279886657608noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-51429448819243235842014-04-26T02:10:34.494-04:002014-04-26T02:10:34.494-04:00Hearty applause! I love the vividness of your deta...Hearty applause! I love the vividness of your details - careful observation is a key to great erotica. I adore the fact that the only (sexual) action is in the narrator's dirty mind. And the ending, as others have noted, has a great pull-the-rug-out-from-under quality. Although I don't feel that your poor, horny narrator deserved it!Lisabet Saraihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05162514190572269660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-91065564567845919952014-04-25T10:17:17.877-04:002014-04-25T10:17:17.877-04:00Hi, Jean- It was a problem as to how to end it, a...Hi, Jean- It was a problem as to how to end it, and it seems everybody likes the way it worked out. Thanks for that!!!Daddy Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12927663248424944119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-45741256140047055252014-04-24T23:48:01.749-04:002014-04-24T23:48:01.749-04:00The momentum showed me that something was going to...The momentum showed me that something was going to happen, but it wasn't clear what. Great, realistic ending. (In a cheesier story, the narrator & the exercising woman would spontaneously get it on, right there, prob. to a round of applause).Jean Robertahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08805088081675965859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-21142991070784745172014-04-23T20:50:53.443-04:002014-04-23T20:50:53.443-04:00Thanks all- It was fun to write flat-out like that...Thanks all- It was fun to write flat-out like that.Daddy Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12927663248424944119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-25858699980778222292014-04-23T20:50:12.913-04:002014-04-23T20:50:12.913-04:00Thanx, Fiona-
and- How generous of your hubby! I&...Thanx, Fiona- <br />and- How generous of your hubby! I'll bet he's happy to share...Daddy Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12927663248424944119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-20370539326370460962014-04-23T18:57:06.611-04:002014-04-23T18:57:06.611-04:00Hilarious ending! Hilarious ending! Annabeth Leonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07455191827664110878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-18313595153793666912014-04-23T11:26:43.418-04:002014-04-23T11:26:43.418-04:00Excellent, in every...fucking...detail!Excellent, in every...fucking...detail!Sacchi Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10801164916418570059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-2409751748382987242014-04-23T11:24:50.281-04:002014-04-23T11:24:50.281-04:00I love this, for all of the imagery! I don't ...I love this, for all of the imagery! I don't have a cock of my own (husband generously shares his with me), and I don't find women sexually attractive. But for a short time, I was that man, watching her ass, imagining doing all of those things to her. Now that's good writing! Thanks for sharing.Fiona McGierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13495707848048468428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-52790792370569541152014-04-23T10:12:34.675-04:002014-04-23T10:12:34.675-04:00Love this, almost stopped reading, didn't see ...Love this, almost stopped reading, didn't see the ending coming. Which is the best kind of writing, IMHO. Thank youAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com