tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post6366854064576027585..comments2023-10-25T05:30:54.507-04:00Comments on Oh Get A Grip!: A Snippet of a Close CallAshe Barkerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03390519279886657608noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-53935922200858200042016-12-01T21:41:27.027-05:002016-12-01T21:41:27.027-05:00Thanks, everyone. I must say, I did enjoy reading ...Thanks, everyone. I must say, I did enjoy reading through this before posting it. It's old enough that it felt new, if that makes sense. I hadn't looked at it in probably three years. And now with all this wonderful feedback I do feel much more inclined to tackle it sooner rather than later. Just have about three projects already slated in that I need to finish first!Willsin Rowehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07255684467269187446noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-27733045454138846462016-11-30T21:49:31.834-05:002016-11-30T21:49:31.834-05:00"my arc has more missing segments than a diss..."my arc has more missing segments than a dissected millipede"<br /><br />whether or not it's true, this is such a great line.<br /><br />Speaking of great lines, the dialogue here is awesome. I agree with everyone telling you to do what you need to in order to finish this. :)Annabeth Leonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07455191827664110878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-75241734440303894342016-11-27T17:55:11.661-05:002016-11-27T17:55:11.661-05:00This WIP looks like great fun to read, even if it&...This WIP looks like great fun to read, even if it's work to write. I think you should finish it too.Jean Robertahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08805088081675965859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-49989753752774770942016-11-27T13:05:12.090-05:002016-11-27T13:05:12.090-05:00I like this, and yes, you should definitely finish...I like this, and yes, you should definitely finish it. Close call, or was he never really going to kill her? Whatever, she didn't know. Great vibe between these two. I wouldn't mind getting to know him better...Ashe Barkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03390519279886657608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-51740724444185070972016-11-26T20:25:10.889-05:002016-11-26T20:25:10.889-05:00Terrific chemistry and concept! The one thing that...Terrific chemistry and concept! The one thing that threw me out of it a bit was that I couldn't help wondering how she could talk so easily while being held in the air by the throat. Maybe a word or two at a time, but not so fluently.Sacchi Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10801164916418570059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-20549762378585022052016-11-26T13:16:13.572-05:002016-11-26T13:16:13.572-05:00Susana--one mouthy little thing, she is. I also li...Susana--one mouthy little thing, she is. I also like these two.Daddy Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12927663248424944119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-50429013931505861062016-11-26T01:41:06.400-05:002016-11-26T01:41:06.400-05:00God, this is brilliant!
You wanna talk about the ...God, this is brilliant!<br /><br />You wanna talk about the story off list? Maybe some discussion would help you fill the plot holes. I think you should bring this to a forward burner, because it is really good!Lisabet Saraihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05162514190572269660noreply@blogger.com