tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post6901258520456788128..comments2023-10-25T05:30:54.507-04:00Comments on Oh Get A Grip!: Succulent blossomsAshe Barkerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03390519279886657608noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-7730498870778790132015-01-01T01:01:19.969-05:002015-01-01T01:01:19.969-05:00I generally think of frustration as faster paced, ...I generally think of frustration as faster paced, but this is dead on as a form of it as well. In a really short story, you've given me an image of a slow moving relationship tragedy—the years it takes to build up this sort of frustration. Well done!Annabeth Leonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07455191827664110878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-21606162883166966032014-12-29T20:31:49.028-05:002014-12-29T20:31:49.028-05:00Suspenseful, and illustrated too! This is well cra...Suspenseful, and illustrated too! This is well crafted.Jean Robertahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08805088081675965859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-25862163167830340482014-12-23T14:22:50.560-05:002014-12-23T14:22:50.560-05:00Uh oh, I meant to post that comment under Lisabet&...Uh oh, I meant to post that comment under Lisabet's story. But it fits here, too, As Daddy X says, "Succulent Blossoms" (Terrific title!) has depths that could be explores in further writings.Sacchi Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10801164916418570059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-84971222849964050272014-12-23T14:19:18.463-05:002014-12-23T14:19:18.463-05:00Great story! Kind of puts the "hard" in ...Great story! Kind of puts the "hard" in hard work cutting words from one's writing.Sacchi Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10801164916418570059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-5636876060645520152014-12-23T12:18:22.589-05:002014-12-23T12:18:22.589-05:00The thrill of anonymous sex. Often an appealing sc...The thrill of anonymous sex. Often an appealing scenario. Sex for sex sake. But this anonymous one seems he needs more. Could be a good intro to something dark.Daddy Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12927663248424944119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-2060172561534123112014-12-23T10:21:34.268-05:002014-12-23T10:21:34.268-05:00Right - no nookie equals frustration big time!Right - no nookie equals frustration big time!JPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10305127219838784688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-33257221329439820202014-12-23T10:20:44.922-05:002014-12-23T10:20:44.922-05:00Wow:
Didn't see that coming (rim shot). Very w...Wow:<br />Didn't see that coming (rim shot). Very well done. If I had more thumbs I'd put them up.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15484640447109164744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-13516451683602132462014-12-23T05:46:54.944-05:002014-12-23T05:46:54.944-05:00Wow. A lot going on in this. I can just picture th...Wow. A lot going on in this. I can just picture the characters.<br /><br />At first I was going to say that the narrator isn't frustrated. But of course, the backroom is just a substitute for what he really craves.Lisabet Saraihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05162514190572269660noreply@blogger.com