tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post8668221778932091206..comments2023-10-25T05:30:54.507-04:00Comments on Oh Get A Grip!: "Hound Dog Part Two: A Little House Cleaning" A story of packing a suitcaseAshe Barkerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03390519279886657608noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-21379682661787314462017-09-19T11:06:55.509-04:002017-09-19T11:06:55.509-04:00I keep thinking about lisabets comment, about catc...I keep thinking about lisabets comment, about catching women's universal fantasy of being desired. I think this must be the essence of what we do, and what romance writing is about when the magic is working right, this universal want or need to know that you are desirable and desired. Not just fancy fucking, but to be lusted after and wanted it's the soul of it all.<br />Garceushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11160407485298015371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-31645781547082159742017-09-19T11:03:21.696-04:002017-09-19T11:03:21.696-04:00T thanks Jean!T thanks Jean!Garceushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11160407485298015371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-42076454983199958872017-09-16T21:47:27.409-04:002017-09-16T21:47:27.409-04:00Garce, this is definitely the best post on this to...Garce, this is definitely the best post on this topic.Jean Robertahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08805088081675965859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-3378177663966770642017-09-16T17:34:29.667-04:002017-09-16T17:34:29.667-04:00In these last two stories I've been unconsciou...In these last two stories I've been unconsciously experimenting with an odd kind of dialogue, a fantasy dialogue in which it looks like two people talking when in fact only one is, but it's really an extension of the kind of dialogue that goes on in my own sexual fantasies. The kind of things I wish I could say to a woman.Garceushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11160407485298015371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-82800945336410717622017-09-16T03:46:13.255-04:002017-09-16T03:46:13.255-04:00This is a delicious continuation to the previous p...This is a delicious continuation to the previous part, Garce. You convey a woman's feeling remarkably well. However, I wonder whether a woman, especially a relatively poor woman like this one, would be able to articulate a man's experience of sex so vividly. <br /><br />You've caught the way we fantasize, though. It's never more than a few breaths from the real world to a world where we are universally desired.Lisabet Saraihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05162514190572269660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-68813497442993293632017-09-15T10:36:04.487-04:002017-09-15T10:36:04.487-04:00It seemed like an interesting thing to do and leav...It seemed like an interesting thing to do and leave hanging in the air.<br /><br />The reason if any might be a sense of bitterness on the play of the maid. Her man left her and she hasn't felt erotic love since. Here's a letter from this passionate man who's staying faithful to the woman and she's having an affair out of sight. So it's possible the maid is being a bit spiteful.Garceushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11160407485298015371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-61513420696086964702017-09-14T23:41:20.186-04:002017-09-14T23:41:20.186-04:00Does the maid think she's doing the man at hom...Does the maid think she's doing the man at home a favor by sending what she thinks is incriminating evidence? It seems so sad. But we already have reason to think that the man and woman's relationship is more complex than the maid could know.Sacchi Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10801164916418570059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-62812977337769039812017-09-13T22:00:19.432-04:002017-09-13T22:00:19.432-04:00It's been so long I forgot about the gallery. ...It's been so long I forgot about the gallery. They gave my early stories daylight for the first time, what a thrill that was and still is.<br /><br />I'll shine this one up and post it. I need to start giving back though and offer critiques also. Thanks Daddy!<br />Garceushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11160407485298015371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-42189619359893475392017-09-13T14:04:17.072-04:002017-09-13T14:04:17.072-04:00This neatly answers questions brought up in Pt. 1,...This neatly answers questions brought up in Pt. 1, which made it to the ERWA gallery. Be sure to submit it to Storytime in the near future so it can be added. Daddy Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12927663248424944119noreply@blogger.com