tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post6920799994523174211..comments2023-10-25T05:30:54.507-04:00Comments on Oh Get A Grip!: Flash Fiction on the EdgeAshe Barkerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03390519279886657608noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-54453308603849492192017-05-08T20:20:38.159-04:002017-05-08T20:20:38.159-04:00A younger friend of mine introduced me to the conc...A younger friend of mine introduced me to the concept of orgasm denial and ruined orgasm... he says that it's an intense feeling.<br /><br />And while I've not had a kid barrel into the room mid-sex, I've had a cat try to cuddle with me... :/Cameron D. Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05825600675668853636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-61109420968922900092017-05-08T20:19:08.760-04:002017-05-08T20:19:08.760-04:00LOL -- I was on lunch break from my day job, hence...LOL -- I was on lunch break from my day job, hence the time limit. I do so little flash fiction, but the few times I've done it, there's been a time limit...Cameron D. Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05825600675668853636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-57053257682915013972017-04-29T05:36:11.737-04:002017-04-29T05:36:11.737-04:00Indeed, I've always found that flash fiction t...Indeed, I've always found that flash fiction took MORE time to write, on a per word basis, because of the need to keep things as concise as possible.Lisabet Saraihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05162514190572269660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-26936816209126728262017-04-28T16:29:24.889-04:002017-04-28T16:29:24.889-04:00Yes. The 20-minute limit seems to apply to the tim...Yes. The 20-minute limit seems to apply to the timeframe of the action as much as it does to the time-limit of the writing. Very cool, and also very male, IMO. Im not sure this kind of torture would work as well on a woman. Ive had several experiences of being interrupted just at the brink of orgasm (once by my kid entering the bedroom where I had a guest -- ackk! Nothing to see here!), and the feeling doesnt come back. Despite th repeated frustration, this piece shows a relationship of trust and responsibility between Dom and sub. Well done.Jean Robertahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08805088081675965859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-53505568977723566752017-04-27T21:37:22.621-04:002017-04-27T21:37:22.621-04:00I can't imagine writing something this polishe...I can't imagine writing something this polished in 20 minutes. The present tense does make it fun to reread and try to decide whether the action of the story takes exactly as long as the writing of it. Certainly seems possible, although my impression is that the sexual tension goes on longer than the writing.Sacchi Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10801164916418570059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-85286376656408077882017-04-27T07:14:02.607-04:002017-04-27T07:14:02.607-04:00Very intense! And perfect for the topic.
Makes me...Very intense! And perfect for the topic.<br /><br />Makes me glad I'm not a guy, though. ;^)Lisabet Saraihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05162514190572269660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-77020341416346410322017-04-26T16:18:56.873-04:002017-04-26T16:18:56.873-04:00Wooo, very hot. I love the way you so vividly desc...Wooo, very hot. I love the way you so vividly describe the effect of worrying about whether the orgasm will be allowed to complete. In general, the sensations come through very clearly.<br /><br />I'm intrigued by the 20 minute time limit. I've never associated that with flash fiction, either, and it seems like an interesting exercise to try!Annabeth Leonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07455191827664110878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9156334464585894857.post-29207025842409671732017-04-26T13:05:41.627-04:002017-04-26T13:05:41.627-04:00Powerful tension and immediacy to this, Cameron. I...Powerful tension and immediacy to this, Cameron. I've written a lot of flash fiction, but I never heard of a time limit. Perhaps in a writing workshop. <br /><br />But the real pleasure of flash fiction is taking this piece and spending some time working it, seeing how far you can trim it down while still retaining its essence. Sometimes it takes me a week to write a 200 word flasher. <br /><br />You'll put yourself in touch with your editing skills and allows you to exercise your vocabulary to the most sophisticated degree.Daddy Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12927663248424944119noreply@blogger.com