by Daddy X
Still carrying on my affair with T.C. Boyle. Two this
quarter:
The Women
When I did a bit here a few months ago on Boyle’s Road To Wellness (about J.H. Kellogg),
Lisabet mentioned another historically-based work by (IMO) one of our greatest
living wordsmiths.
“The Women” follows, or rather effects, a reverse chronology
of the wives of architect Frank Lloyd Wright. Last wife first, and not much
about the first. No matter. His rendering of these human beings spins off the
page at times, especially in the case of the headstrong, morphine-addicted Meriam,
Wright’s third love.
Boyle employs a unique introduction using a fictitious composite
Japanese apprentice (Tadashi) who follows the narrator throughout the work and
keeps him honest while one Seamus O’Flaherty, an American Biographer (Boyle
himself) relates the tale. If my set-up sounds rather complicated, Boyle does a
much better job of convincing the reader of the machinations, using Tadashi’s
numerous footnotes.
Now don’t get rattled by the specter of footnotes. These are
not footnotes that pull the reader from the story with some arcane fact or
diversion from the story arc. They have real impact on the tale, and there will
be times when you’re waiting for Tadashi to pop in with his often humorous
Japanese take on the biographer’s account.
Wright is presented as a pompous serial philanderer, a
self-important, self-promotion scheme on two feet, in spats, wearing flamboyant
clothes, driving exotic cars in long scarves, all balanced on his dick. He goes
through wives in a pattern of sorts: first she’s the apple of his eye, then a
discarded and vituperative source of payback that brings down trial after trial
on the extended Wright family.
I’ve said enough. Read it yourself. You won’t be
disappointed. Humor, pathos, love, hate, loss, gain, all delivered with the
intensity of a tornado.
The Terranauts
Boyle’s latest. Momma X gave it to me for Xmas. One of those
‘can’t put it down’ deals. Just finished last week.
Opens with choosing the personnel of a biosphere to be closed
then opened two years in the future. Competition is, well, competitive among
the candidates, sixteen members of a ‘team’, half of whom would be sidelined
until the initial confinement was finished and the teams would essentially
trade places.
That’s the plan anyway. But as usual, not everything planned
will come off accordingly. Problems arise. Air and exhaust systems malfunction.
Heat and humidity. Problems among the crew. Problems outside the biosphere, in
“Mission Control”.
But I’m not here to tell you the story. With this intro,
you’ll probably imagine a ‘Lord of the Flies” scenario. You’re not that far off, though Boyle presents this
aspect with enviable subtlety and style, employing three first-person accounts:
Two people inside the manufactured environment, one still outside and jealous
of those who made it in.
What makes me crazy about this Boyle dude is that he
counters many of the dogmatic elements I rely on to write a story or do
critiques on ERWA. He uses long sentences, often fifty words and more. He also
uses one-word sentences. And everything in between. I don’t know if two of his
longer sentences are ever structured alike. His prose flows so easily, I can comfortably
read through all the extraneous and redundant words I would ordinarily try to
avoid. His vocabulary is so complete, I learn new words in every chapter, most
that are obvious as to the meaning so the reader doesn’t have to go and look
them up. What the hell kind of talent is that? How could an author surmise so
much and still get it across?
No Slam Dancing,
No Stage Diving, No Spikes
By Amy Yates Wuefling and Steven DiLudivico
Whoa! WTF? A first-run concert venue in Trenton fucking New
Jersey? Where I grew the fuck up?
A couple of years ago, John Stewart (The Daily Show)
featured the authors of this book on his show. Turns out that in his youth, Stewart
had tended bar at the place. He went off about the wild scene at City Gardens,
located in perhaps the worst neighborhood in a town that was, at the time, the acknowledged
armpit of the east coast: Trenton, New fucking Jersey, (either version
acceptable) my home fucking town.
In Trenton-speak, most sentences feature the word ‘fuck’ ‘fucked’
or ‘fucking’.
My parents would talk the fuck out of the big band era, when
fucking Trenton (right the fuck between Philadelphia and New fucking York on Route
1) would host the likes of Basie, Ellington, and Artie the fuck Shaw. They and
other luminaries had convenient Trenton on their fucking tour plans. Even in my
time of early rock and fucking doo-whop, groups with top fucking 40 hits would
be featured at every fucking weekend record hop. I saw The fucking Isley
Brothers. Fucking Brenda Lee. Frankie fucking Lyman and the fucking Teenagers.
Whooooops! Sorry. I traveled back to Jersey in October.
Guess my old speech patterns caught up to me. ;>)
Fuck—part of the appeal for me was that local aspect. Even
though by the 80’s, when this book begins, I’d been gone for many years, still the
fucked specter of Calhoun Street looms over my memories. In 25 years living in
or near Trenton, I don’t think I ever got the fuck out of the car on fucking
Calhoun Street. Fuck that.
I do remember the building that housed City Gardens. Back in
the 40’s, it was the Giant Tiger, what a super market aspired to in those days;
later A-1 Motors, a rip-off used car lot
just up the street from “Big-Hearted Nat,” another fuck of a place to buy a
car.
The authors have chronicled every drunken, violent, fucked-up,
spaced-out concert ever held at City
Gardens over fifteen years, using conversations with performers, parents, regular
attendees, bouncers, bartenders, and general hangers-on who remember details of
each and every show, those details often of varying consistency. I have to wonder how
much was lost to the ether.
This book informed me of a style of music (and behavior) I
was never privy to: Punk Rock. Hardcore. Metal. Skinheads. Slam dancing. Stage
diving. Throwing bottles at the band. Spitting on each other. Punching people
because it’s fun. Getting punched because it’s fun. Shudder. How fucking Trenton!
Randy Now, a mailman from across the river in Bucks County
Pa., booked the bands, promoted the shows and kept the chaotic scene somewhat intact
for 15 years. It seems he was loved and respected for providing a much-needed
venue (1200 capacity) for upcoming artists as well as better-known performers
traveling between Philadelphia and New York. If nothing else, meeting this
tireless and dedicated individual in print made the read worthwhile.
At this point, I’d like to mention two writers we lost last
year who have been influences, not only on my own desire to write, but on life
itself.
Katherine Dunn
In 1989, Ms. Dunn wrote what at the time I thought was the
ultimate novel: Geek Love, about the Binewskis, a down-on-their-luck carnival
family. Rather than hiring expensive freaks, they decide to birth their own,
plying the mother (Diamond Lil) with drugs, arsenic, biological waste, paint
thinner and radio isotopes. This book is humor, philosophy, fantasy, action,
romance, erotica all at once. Just imagine possibilities for Siamese twin girl pianists,
coming of age joined at the waist.
I tried reading Dunn’s first two novels, Attic and Truck,
both so stylized as to get in the way of the story. No matter, Geek Love shows
an immense capacity for imagination and how human we are in our differences.
Dunn was apparently a singular person, by all accounts
well-traveled, obviously intelligent, and worked as a boxing stringer for
several newspapers. She took boxing lessons herself during her 40’s.
Jim Harrison
When I was told in 2005 that I’d have to do a year of
Interferon/Ribavirin treatment to save my new, cancer-free liver from the ongoing
ravages of Hep C, a good friend brought me a sack of Jim Harrison books. The bag contained: Legends of the Fall, Wolf, Dalva, Sundog, Warlock and The Road Home.
I believe I read The Road Home first,
a big, semi-biographical account of a Midwestern family. After reading that
batch, I then went out and bought A Woman
Lit by Fireflies and A Good Day To
Die.
Harrison, also a noted poet, writes of big vistas, setting
his stories in the great plains of Nebraska or Michigan’s upper peninsula,
never sentimental or cloying, but describing the changing ways we are affected
by modernity. Just the thing for someone whose future is in question.
Though I can only aspire to these masters of our art, they
both showed us what grand things could be done with the written word.
RIP
These are great reviews, Daddy X. I love how much you're obviously learning from each writer. Each review has its own tone that I'm guessing reflects on the book you're talking about and honors the writer who produced it.
ReplyDeleteI think it's really interesting that you love a writer (Boyle) who uses techniques you avoid in your own work. Maybe it would be good to try some of his out for yourself and see if they expand your writing toolkit? On the other hand, I definitely read some people I really admire, but who do things I'm sure would never work for me.
Could it be that we osmose leanings in style/structure without consciously realizing it?
DeleteI have tried writing short pieces in the style of J.P. Donleavy, but unless someone knew I was attempting his style, they would probably think I didn't now what TF I was doing, jumping tenses and mixing POV and viewpoint.
Someone with a very distinctive style can make me even think in that style for a short while, but generally not long enough for me to apply it to my writing. I suspect that influences from long, long ago when I was young and impressionable (or, in terms of osmosis, more permeable) affect my writing more. Although I do occasionally get a "sense of wonder" that makes me shout, internally, "I didn't know a writer could get away with that! Wow!"
ReplyDeleteHave you read any of Janet Evanovich's Stephanie Plum books? They're set in (nineteen nineties) Trenton, and portray the place with both humor and affection.
ReplyDeleteThe Women is my absolute favorite Boyle book so far. It's a masterpiece of style, structure and characterization. The Terranauts sounds interesting, though. Boyle gives me hope, because he has no "brand" whatsoever. Aside from his fabulous craft, every book is different.
I have tried Evanovitch but her work doesn't do it for me. Momma X, however reads her.
DeleteI actually should have mentioned something about "No Slam Dancing, No Sage Diving, No Spikes. They say, now that rents are going up in Philly and New York, that Trenton is becoming a place where artists can afford to set up. Lots of abandoned factories and warehouses that go for cheap.
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