By
Lisabet Sarai
He’d
left it behind when he moved out. Guess the old bathrobe became too
ratty even for his casual tastes. She can’t look at it without
seeing his wiry frame wrapped in the faded plaid flannel, crouched
over his poetry at the kitchen table. Vodka on one side, smoldering
cigarette on the other, close enough to touch, a million miles away.
She
holds it to her face, breathing him in, sweat and tobacco, and
underneath, that elusive musk that first hooked her. Addictive,
intoxicating—in an instant she’s drunk with the astounding lust
that first drew them together. Eyes closed, she relives their
ecstatic frenzy, the clarity of pure connection. In bed they were one
body, obscene and holy. She never cared what they did; every carnal
act felt like a sacrament. The loss of him, of that glory, is a vast,
black, aching wound in her chest.
He’d
felt it, too. Inhaling her female perfume, he lost himself, drowned
in her lushness. Scary. One reason— along with his wanderlust—that
he’s gone.
Chemistry’s
not the same as compatibility.
She
stuffs the rag between her thighs. Eventually the flannel will smell only
of her.
Well done, Lisabet! I love it when erotica writers expertly evoke the olfactory.
ReplyDeleteDo you know this story by K. D. Grace?
http://eroticaforall.co.uk/free-erotic-reads/free-read-pheromones-by-k-d-grace/
Hi, Jeremy! Thanks for your compliment. Haven't read KD's story but will check it out when I get back from my current trip.
DeleteThis flasher is based on real life experiences. It's so aggravating when your biology tells you that you've found your soulmate, but the conscious mind doesn't agree.
Sultry and sensual, Lisabet. You should post this on ERWA some flasher Sunday.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Daddy. I intend to!
DeleteBeautifully written! (I thought of saying masterfully, but then I wondered whether I should say mistressfully, which spellcheck doesn't recognize, and then I just shrugged.)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sacchi!
DeleteI used to have terrible trouble writing flashers. For some reason it has become much easier, maybe because I think of them more as poetry than prose.
I admire people who can do flash fiction well. I've tried it but I'm not as good at it.
ReplyDeleteThat is something I've always found wonderful about women, how they can be attracted to the smell of their man. That's so primal.
Garce
Aren't you attracted to the smell of a woman?
DeleteAnyway, I think this is almost unconscious, especially at first.
This is really beautiful, Lisabet, and resonates for me (that idea of how strong smell can be, and how it may not match the actual experience of being with a person...)
ReplyDeleteThanks! Sometimes truth is painful.
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